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제목 태권도 show 등록일 2014-07-14
내용 Hi all,



I have a story to share with you.

Last Friday, I went to the K-Art hall in the Olympic park to see THETAL with my family.

It was about 태권도(Tak kwon do) show. The show started at 7 PM and ended around 8:30.

Totally, it was great. The show was conbined with 3 parts
They are 태권도, B-boy and dancing. After that, my children liked it and felt good.

My children have learned for several years but now they are not good at 태권도 even though they are 3품 and 1품.

It was agreat family time and I also thank to a teacher of 태권도 academy who gave us tickets for the show.
담당강사 Elizabeth2 등록일 2014-07-15
첨삭 내용

Hi all! I have a story to share with you. Last Friday, I went to the K-Art hall in Olympic park to see THETAL with my family. The performance was about Tak kwon do. The show started at 7 PM and ended around 8:30. It was totally great/awesome! The show was made up of 3 parts. They were 태권도, B-boy(ing), and dancing. After it was all over, my children liked it and I felt good! My children have learned over the years that/to... It was a great family outing/night and I also wanted to thank the teacher of 태권도 academy who gave us tickets for the show.

Nice Ben! I can tell you're getting better!!

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