-> Hi Beth,

-> Thank you for the feedback.

-> I want to ask for feedback on the document below.

-> Last Saturday and Sunday, I went to a family trip. We went with the my mother-in-law.

-> I often go on a trip with my mother-in-law. We went there to see the beach.

-> I go to the beach twice a year, in the summer and winter

-> The first good thing I like this is the good view on of the sea and I like take a walk on the beach. I love to see the sea.

-> Nowadays, Because of the it's summer, beach korea has a there are lots of people at the beach.

-> Many people is are swimming on in the sea and eat the sashimi. Sashimi is eat live fresh fish. Sashimi very dilicious delicious. and I love Sashmi sashimi.

Hi David,

Thank you for sending another composition and for telling me about your trip to the beach. I hope your

mother-in-law had a great time, too.

I will call again tomorrow for our class, okay?

-Beth-