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제목 The funeral of my friend's father. 등록일 2025-04-04
내용 Yesterday, I went to the funeral of my friend's father.

He is 74 years old, and he has been suffering from an illiness for several years.

When I arrived at funeral, my friend started to cry as soon as he saw me.

I thought about my mother, she become 70years old this year, and some day she will die....and that makes me very sad....
담당강사 Heni1 등록일 2025-04-04
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Yesterday, I went to the funeral of my friend's father.  ( or My friend's father's funeral)

He is 74 years old, and he haD been suffering from an illiness for several years.

When I arrived at THE funeral, my friend started to cry as soon as he saw me.

I thought about my mother, she WILL  becOme 70 years old this year, and some day she will die....and that makes me very sad....

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