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제목 Today's class 등록일 2014-07-16
내용 Dear Cecile,

Thank you for your feedback on today's class. I realized that I had some problems in pronouncing both V and F sounds. I will try to improve thoses pronunciations from now on.

You told me that a strong typhoon landed at the Philippines and you were scared to go outside. Hopefully, you and your folks won't have any damage by the typhoon. During the class last month, my ex-teacher told me the super-typhoon, Heinan, had pounded and wrecked havoc on your country last year. I don't think we can avoid natural disasters but I am sure we are able to minimize the damage to an extent which we can manage even though we get in trouble by natrual disasters.

Anyway, I hope you can go back home safely by tonight.

Curtis
담당강사 Cecile1 등록일 2014-07-18
첨삭 내용

Dear Cecile,

Thank you for your feedback on today's class. I realized that I had some problems in pronouncing both V and F sounds.

I will try to improve thoses pronunciations from now on.

-- I will try to improve those pronunciations from now on.

You told me that a strong typhoon landed at the Philippines and you were scared to go outside. Hopefully, you and your folks won't have any damage by the typhoon.

During the class last month, my ex-teacher told me the super-typhoon, Heinan, had pounded and wrecked havoc on your country last year.

--During the class last month, my ex-teacher told me the super-typhoon, Heinan, had created and wrecked havoc on your country last year.

I don't think we can avoid natural disasters but I am sure we are able to minimize the damage to an extent which we can manage even though we get in trouble by natrual disasters. Anyway, I hope you can go back home safely by tonight.

Curtis

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