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제목 | I so tired~ | 등록일 | 2014-07-16 |
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내용 | My favorite shooing center is 잠실 롯데 Department store. It is located in the east of side seoul. It's a huge seven-story building and it has stores that sell all types of products from groceries to cloths and furniture. The whole building is very clean and modern-looking so i like it. Also, it cake only five minutes to get there from my house. Three years ago, We went to saipan celebrate anniversary wedding with my families. The atmosphere of the resort we checked into was very traditional and beautiful. My son and i usually play baseball while my daughter swimming My wife reads book at the beach and the saipan is the perfect place for my families. If i get the chance, i'd like to go to trip to Australia. It's i had gone honeymoon. |
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담당강사 | Paula | 등록일 | 2014-07-18 |
첨삭 내용 | My favorite shooing center is 잠실 롯데 Department store. It is located in the east of side seoul. It's a huge seven-story building and it has stores that sell all types of products from groceries to cloths and furniture. The whole building is very clean and modern-looking so i like it. Also, it cake only five minutes to get there from my house. -> My favorite shopping center is 잠실 롯데 Department store. It is located in the east of side Seoul. It's a huge seven-story building and it has stores that sell all types of products from groceries to cloths and furniture. The whole building is very clean and modern-looking so I like it. Also, it takes only five minutes to get there from my house. Three years ago, We went to saipan celebrate anniversary wedding with my families. The atmosphere of the resort we checked into was very traditional and beautiful. My son and i usually play baseball while my daughter swimming My wife reads book at the beach and the saipan is the perfect place for my families. If i get the chance, i'd like to go to trip to Australia. It's i had gone honeymoon. -> Three years ago, We went to Saipan to celebrate our anniversary wedding with my families. The atmosphere of the resort we checked into was very traditional and beautiful. My son and I usually play baseball while my daughter likes swimming. My wife reads book at the beach and Saipan is the perfect place for my families. If I get the chance, I'd like to go to a trip to Australia.
================================================================================================= Hi Bryan, Thank you for always writing to express your ideas. Just remember to check the corrections so that you won't commit the same mistakes again. Going to a beautiful place for vacation with your family is really priceless because you have the chance to spend more time with them. I hope that you will always find time for your family.:) |