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| 제목 | My family | 등록일 | 2014-07-16 |
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| 내용 | I have a mother, elder sister, younger brother. They live together except me in other city. When i was 17, my father died by cancer. I live in 화성 city with my wife and children now. I was married in 1993 and I have one son and one daughter. There are five people in my family including me. My son entered university last year and my daughter is a third-year student in high school. It is difficult to hang out together, because my family's hobby is different. I like to go out, my wife wants to stay home, my son likes internet game, my princess likes karaoke. However, my family understanding each other is very happy. |
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| 담당강사 | Riz | 등록일 | 2014-07-17 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I have a mother, elder sister and younger brother. They live together except me in other city. - Good When i was 17, my father died I live in 화성 city with my wife and children now.- Good I was married in 1993 and I have one son and one daughter. There are five people in my family including me.- good My son entered in the university last year and my daughter is a third-year student in high school. It is difficult to hang out together, because I like to go out, my wife wants to stay home, my son likes internet game and my princess likes karaoke. However, my family
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Thank you much for writing about your family. appreciate your time.See you in the class |
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