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제목 Go camping with my friend next weekend .. 등록일 2014-07-17
내용 Hi, Bree. This is Jason.
I'm calling to ask you whether you can join my camping trip next weekend.

Last time when we talked about camping, I felt that you were also quite interested in going,
so I'd like to ask you.
If you can join us, that would be great.
But before we decide on next weekend's camping.
I thought that I should ask about your opinion on the camping.

First, where do you like to go camping?
Is there any special place you want to go? If so, please don't hesitate to tell me.
And another thing, do you have a tent? If you join us, my tent may be insufficient.
If you don't have one, we have to ask other friends whether they have one we can borrow.

Anyway, please call me back and tell me your decision as soon as possible.
Bye.
담당강사 Bree 등록일 2014-07-17
첨삭 내용

Hi Bree, this is Jason.

I'm callin gto ask you whether you can join my camping trip next weekend.

In our previous class we talked about camping and I thought you were quite interested in going that's why I'd like to ask you.

If you can join us, that would be great.

But before we decide on weekend's camping, I thought I should ask you about your opinion about the camp.

First, where do you like to go camping?

Is there a special place you'd like to go to? If so, please don't hesitate to tell me.

And one more thing, do you have a tent? If you would join us, my tent might not be enough for us.

If you don't have, maybe I can ask one of my friends to lend us if they have an extra tent.

Anyway, please call me back and tell me your decision as soon as possible.

Bye.

<Hello there, Jason. Your letter is good, but I'm sure you can make it more perfect next time. And about your question, it's true that I really like camping. But I'm afraid, although I would really love to, I couldn't join you this weekend. You see Korea is not that near to the Philippines. I'm very sorry about that. But I'm looking forward to that day where I can finally join you and your friends camping someday. I'm sure you'll have so much fun this weekend. Send my regards to your friends. Have fun time!>

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