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제목 Hi Beth, 등록일 2014-07-18
내용 Hi Beth,
I want to ask for feedback on the document below

How are you feeling today?

This morning, I'm good but a little tired

Because Yesterday I had to work late.

It's very busy in the company

I work overtime every.

I think most korea people were late for work

The Korean people are work 60-hours a week



Today Topic is Movies ?role play (asking questions) unit 18, right?

This time, I ask questions and You will answer me , okey?


I have a question about movies

I recently saw the movie, transformers 4

Did you see the movie?

If yor are movie transformers4 , Did you have fun?


And I have addintional some question about movies

Have you recently seen any movie about?

Where you live in near theater?

Whish kinds of movie theaters do you like going to and why?
담당강사 Beth 등록일 2014-07-21
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Hi Beth,

-->  I want to ask for feedback on the document below.

-->  How are you feeling today? This morning, I'm good but a little tired because Yesterday I had to work late yesterday.

-->  It's very busy in the company. I work overtime everyday. I think most korea people were late for work Korean people work until late.

--> The Korean people are work 60-hours a week.

--> Today's topic is Movies ?role play (asking questions) unit 18, Unit 18 Movies- Role Play (Asking Questions), right?

--> This time, I'll ask questions and you will answer me, okay?

--> I have a question about movies. I recently saw the movie, Transformers 4. Did Have you see seen the movie?

--> If yor are movie transformers4 , Did you have fun? And I have addintional additional some questions about movies.

-->  Have you recently seen any movie recently?  about?

--> Where Do you live in near a theater?

--> Whish kinds What of movie theaters do you like going to and why?

 

Hello David,

Thank you for sending me this composition. I'm doing well though, I'm sorry for the  late reply.

Let me answer your questions, then.

I haven't seen the movie, Transformers 4 and the last movie I've watched was Maleficent.

The nearest theater is 30-minutes away from my home. I'm an old-fashioned person that's why I prefer the old type of movie theaters.

I don't like 3-D or IMAX. I hope this helps.

Let's talk again in class, okay? Take care and have a good day.

 

-Beth- laugh

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