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제목 | my neighborhood | 등록일 | 2014-07-21 |
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내용 | I live a apartment near my office in 수원 city. But my office is in other city. My neighborhood is not affluent and has many trees. My neighborhood has many children but My neighborhood is quite. Because it stay away from the downtown area where there are main road and many buildings and many convenience facilities. Also because All children go to preschool or school. So My neighborhood is crowded only time to and from school. The most famous restaurant in my neighborhood is Chinese restaurant '황하'. The restaurant is not only delicious but also inexpensive. There is a small park right ahead to my house, so I go there sometimes after work. I like my neighborhood because it is calm and it has nice landscaping. |
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담당강사 | Riz | 등록일 | 2014-07-21 |
첨삭 내용 | I live in an But my office is in the other city. My neighborhood is not affluent and has many trees. - Good My neighborhood has many children but My neighborhood is Because Also because a So My neighborhood is crowded only by the time they out The most famous restaurant in my neighborhood is Chinese restaurant '황하'. -Good The restaurant is not only delicious but also inexpensive._ good There is a small park right ahead to my house, so I go there sometimes after work.- Good I like my neighborhood because it is calm and it has nice landscaping.- Good
Hi There,
Merry monday! You really improve a lot in your composotion . Keep up the good job
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