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| 제목 | The history of my company. | 등록일 | 2014-07-21 |
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| 내용 | I work for Samsung SDS in Seoul, Korea. My company was first founded in 1985 as one of the affiliates of Samsung Group. Since its establishment back in 1985, SDS has been working hard to improve business efficiency of Samsung Group customers by maintaining their information systems. Originally, my company's basic mission was to help our customers increase their competitiveness by offering the most optimal IT services. We are taking a lead in raising Korea’s industrial competitiveness through ICT service implementations for not only Samsung Group but also customers in such diverse industries as public sector, financial service and manufacturing services. Currently my company is leading the Information Technology industry in Korea and is one of the best ICT companies in the world. I'm very proud of my company. |
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| 담당강사 | Bree | 등록일 | 2014-07-21 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I work for Samsung SDS in Seoul, Korea. My company was founded in 1985 as one of the affiliates of Samsung Group. Since its establisment back in 1985, SBS has been working hard to improve business efficinecy of Samsung Group customers by maintaining their information systems. Originally, my company's main missions was to help our customers increase their competitiveness by offering the most optimal IT services. We are taking a lead in raising Korea's industrial competitiveness through ICT service implementations not only for Samsung Group but also those customers in diverse industries such as public sectors, financial and manufacturing services. Currently my company is leading the Information Technology Industry in Korea and is one of the best ICT Companies in the world. I am very proud of my company. |
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