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제목 Hi, beth 등록일 2014-07-21
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Good morning
How are you this morning ?
Today is Monday,
Did you have a nice weekend ?
And How was your weekend ?
My parent are living in the countryside
I went to the country side my parent's house.
These days, Korea is very hot
The temperature was 35 degrees duaring the day
We play it cool on the river
Korea is the summer vacation period
Did you have summer vacation plan?
I’m still not planning a vacation
Today Topic is Movies –role play Business(role play-asking questions in a situation) right ?
I have a question about business
I Ask questions and You will answer me okey?
As far as I know you are an English teacher
I had a few questions to ask about the English education
What is your university major ?
Are you jobs is high school English teacher ?
First of all, I was wondering how much time we had to work on the English education
You several times a day do you work?
담당강사 Beth 등록일 2014-07-22
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I want to ask for feedback on the document below.

--> Good morning. How are you this morning ? Today is Monday, did you have a nice weekend? And How was your weekend ?

--> My parents are living in the countryside. I went to the country side my parent's house in the countryside.

--> These days, Korea is very hot. The temperature was is 35 degrees duaring during the day.

--> We play it cool on played in the river. Korea It is the summer vacation period in Korea. Did Do you have summer vacation plan?

--> I’m I still not planning a don't have plans for vacation.

--> Today's topic is Movies –role play Business(role play-asking questions in a situation) Business- Role Play (Asking questions in a situation), right ?

-->  I have a question about business. I'll ask the questions and you will answer me, okay?

-->  As far as I know, you are an English teacher. I had have a few questions to ask about the English education.

--> What is was your university major in university? Are you  jobs is a high school English teacher?

--> First of all, I was wondering how much time we you had to work on the English education. You several times a day do you work? 

 

Hello David,

Thank you for sending me another composition. Let me answer your questions.

I took Bachelor of Secondary Education, Major in English and I had to stusy both for my minor and major subjects everyday.

On my last year in university, I had to teach high school students for 6months as part of our training. Three months inside the university high school department and

another three months outside. The university had to locate the nearest highschool in my area where I can continue my training. Hope it helps.

I will call again tomorrow, okay?

 

-Beth- laugh

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